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Erased For Publishing

About tattered wings-This haiku is published in haiku journal

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Dan Helppi

Date: 10/23/2014 6:28:00 PM

The mallard's last cry just may quiet a hungry child's. But sadly, in today's world much of hunting is merely sport. I like how you transmit much with little, Nice!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/4/2014 7:24:00 AM

- Animal World .... great haiku Charmaine!!! - The network "fell out" at my place yesterday .... only got into my own poems .... much to read today :))) - Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 10/3/2014 1:00:00 PM

Brilliant my dear .....hunting season started yesterday here....hugs Tim

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/3/2014 12:53:00 PM

mind bending beautifully crafted piece charmaine lots of visions comes to mind in this one dear friend excellent pen

Jan Allison

Date: 10/3/2014 11:55:00 AM

wonderfully descriptive Haiku Charmaine:-) Hugs Jan xx