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Eradicating All Traces of Sin

When freedom spoiled me, and lovers blinded me with their false affections, no wisdom was present in any thought, although I heard its sound sweeter than a symphony; friends frowned, taking away their smile... I refused to grow up by remaining a foolish child. And I sinned because I couldn't see the difference in the good things that made one wiser and more serene; perhaps this lesson had to be learned to separate foolishness from wisdom to make me understand that I had to make better choices. Finally, salvation came as that morning prayer brought Heaven's hope to my doorsteps where sunlight never shone; finally, I acquired the wisdom to choose a purposeful life based on truth, and cleanness of soul... eradicating all traces of sin. Written by Andrew Crisci for nette oncloud's contest, " Serenity Response " Phrase: "....and wisdom to know the difference "

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Date: 1/27/2012 6:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your amazing write. Good job. Best regards, Jon
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Date: 1/26/2012 10:56:00 PM
Congratulations on a very fine and so deserving, Ist Place win, Andrew...A beautiful, insightful write. ..wisdom is a wonderful gift but like roses have to be pruned we have to also to make us ready for it! I will add this to my list of favs. Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/26/2012 7:00:00 PM
I don't know what to say Andrew for I believe man created the concept of sin and I also can not imagine a man without traces of this human creation. However, I respect and care that you are content and happy. Congrad's. I will focus on that Light & Love
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Date: 1/26/2012 4:42:00 PM
congrats Andrew on this tremendous poem winning second place for Nette's contest luv.. always brilliant ..
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Date: 1/26/2012 4:21:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win!
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Date: 1/26/2012 10:42:00 AM
That indeed is powerful wisdom to differentiate right from wrong, a divine and moving wisdom. A fact, and a beautifully crafted poem. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/26/2012 5:14:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in Nette's "Serenity Response" contest Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/25/2012 1:39:00 AM
hi andrew, kindly check grammar or typo error of this line.." I heard it's (ITS)sound sweeter than a symphony;".. is that what you meant,, kindly update as my contest is done and i'm judging tomorrow.. good luck!! :) huggs!
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