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ER … HELLO Hello How do you do Do you come here often I come nearly every day You know Sorry You are quite right To look at me aghast That was a corny chat-up line I used You see I get tongue-tied When I meet someone new Who is as beautiful as you And then .. Oh dear I’ve dug a hole And I can’t seem to stop It’s getting deeper all the time I’ll go What’s that Don’t go you say You liked my chat-up line You think we might get on quite well Oh wow 15th April 2023 Traditional Cinquain Poetry contest Sponsor - Sotto Poet

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Date: 5/3/2023 7:49:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in Lasaad's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara Reply
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Date: 5/1/2023 12:30:00 PM
So full of human emotions and delight - one heart reaching out to another and finding a kindred soul! I really like the conversation style of the poem - the stream of consciousness. Congratulations on your win. Blessings to you Bryn!
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Date: 4/30/2023 4:28:00 PM
this is a really fun read. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/29/2023 10:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 4/28/2023 12:01:00 PM
A lovely series ... well done, Bryn :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 4/28/2023 1:14:00 AM
What a breath of fresh air this is! Congratulations on your placement - great fun!
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Date: 4/27/2023 6:17:00 PM
Thank you so much for sharing your amazing poem in my Poetry Contest.  Congratulations on your win
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