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Equinox

Every day moves differently. Quietly ebbing and flowing, Under the guidance of time, Invigorating growth even when Neutral systems dictate cell death. Only to show greater maturity, whether Xeric or soggy – grow!

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Jim Slaughter

Date: 3/20/2023 10:24:00 AM

I like this a lot, Elizabeth...especially "Under the guidance of time".

Elizabeth Feeley
Date: 3/20/2023 1:11:00 PM

Thanks for the encouragement, Jim. Even though it's snowing and blowing, I like to be reminded that spring's a comin'.

Joseph May

Date: 3/20/2023 9:12:00 AM

An apt write for the day, I enjoyed the read

Elizabeth Feeley
Date: 3/20/2023 1:13:00 PM

Glad you liked it Joseph. We lived in a region that has long winters and this marks a turning towards the warmer time of year. Appreciate the encouragement.