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Equilibrium

My vision tingles, colors awaken as if they'd been fossilized in a photograph of black and white. My sight starts to single out exactly what isn't there. I stare, immense beauty exploding- a supernova of stellar Earthly sights pierces the veil of vile synthetic lights. They skew, anew, casting golden lemon drop crystals amongst the freshly sprouted green petals of grass. And at last, while sharing their golden nectar amid white wisps of washed out clouds that patch the glistening sky, dragonflies flitter by. Intertwined and combined in perfect unison, they sing- all is as it should be, we are the epitome of yin and yang.

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Date: 3/8/2016 8:27:00 PM
Hi Amber, Excellent write.. I like the alliterative wordplay: "veil of vile..skew-anew"; the rhyming imagery is great too: "dragonfly'''flitter by"--nice! The Yin-Yang reference makes for a restful yet emphatic finish. So good job! Cheers, Brian
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Date: 2/23/2016 7:26:00 AM
- Welcome with your first poems here on PoetrySoup, Amber - PoetrySoup is simply the world's best :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/17/2016 12:28:00 PM
Amber, thank you for the kind reply to my comment. Have a nice day. LINDA
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Date: 2/15/2016 3:16:00 PM
This is a lovely poem, and your imagery is truly beautiful. Welcome to the site! ~ Regards // paul
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Amber Lane
Date: 2/15/2016 10:37:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 2/15/2016 5:42:00 AM
Nicely done Amber....welcome to the soup...we're just around the corner - cheers! :)
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Amber Lane
Date: 2/15/2016 10:37:00 PM
Thank you! Excited to be here :)
Date: 2/15/2016 3:01:00 AM
Very nice Amber. Peace and many blessings to you.
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Amber Lane
Date: 2/15/2016 10:38:00 PM
Thank you! To you as well <3
Date: 2/15/2016 2:30:00 AM
Amber, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Amber Lane
Date: 2/15/2016 10:38:00 PM
Thank you so much, Linda! I feel so welcomed :)

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