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‘What is this strange place we find ourselves in, Trapped in the open, we are free within’ If I pretend and spin a thread, would it pull You closer to the soft center of my web? If I gave you my mouth and swallowed my pride Would you smile or laugh out loud from deep inside If I were to wink would you see the grief trapped In eye ink? Would you see the calm bravado in my never-blinking eyes If in the dead of night I screamed out in pain? Would the inclement weather, let me flow with the rain If we click to see, to capture a feeling? Would my breath inside a frame, stand still, un-feeling If we receive a wondrous kiss from a breathtaking view Would it comfort and cradle cherished things that are so few! 21.3.22 Sponsor: Unseeking Seeker Contest name: The Matrix

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Date: 4/10/2022 9:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. I love the ending. Have a blessed day......................
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Carol Mitra
Date: 4/10/2022 11:26:00 PM
Thanks dear Paula ....I loved writing it too....much love :)
Date: 4/8/2022 9:13:00 PM
Beautiful questions and explorations. Congratulations!
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Carol Mitra
Date: 4/10/2022 11:25:00 PM
Thanks dear Christuraj ......much appreciated :)
Date: 4/8/2022 8:25:00 PM
Beautiful reflections, Carol! Thank you for sharing with us all. Congrats on your win!
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Carol Mitra
Date: 4/10/2022 11:24:00 PM
Thanks....I loved writing this poem :)
Date: 4/8/2022 8:25:00 PM
I love this. Glad to see it on the winner list. Congratulations
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Carol Mitra
Date: 4/10/2022 11:24:00 PM
Thanks dear Andrea.....I am glad too :)

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