Epitaph of Love

Lost for words, writers' block- everything said ? Lost for love, broken up- my emotions dead

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/20/2009 7:18:00 AM

Be careful, son, flowers grow from seeds not roots alone ... look what you produced with only the seed of what you think is dead. David is on the right track ... I am gonna run with tribute, Love.

David Smalling

Date: 5/19/2009 9:14:00 AM

And out of that death you did this? Then T.S. Eliot was almost right ...May is the cruellest month of the year, inspring fresh poems out of dead thoughts. Love.

Shirin Neshat

Date: 5/15/2009 11:48:00 PM

I feel like that sometimes. You described it well.

Nathan Leccese

Date: 5/15/2009 7:15:00 PM

Wonderful! So little said but so much knowledge gained!

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 5/15/2009 2:36:00 PM

Brain Wonderfully expressed in so few words that's what I like about you, you say so much with so few words! Love Laura :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/15/2009 7:20:00 AM

This is wonderful and poignant with emotion....you speak with a true poet's heart! Loved this comparing poetry and love! Excellent work here!!! ~ love, Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/15/2009 6:07:00 AM

Yes, must agree with the others on the comparison. Second verse leaves me terribly sad. So well written! Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/15/2009 4:37:00 AM

This is done well...you drew a nice comparison like kristin said between the events...good work.

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 5/15/2009 2:58:00 AM

I love the comparason between writer's block and lost love. both, terrible, terrible, terrible. but not this poem, it's wonderful. :) love, Kristin

Lena Townsend

Date: 5/15/2009 12:46:00 AM

So much emotion in this write, very touching and sad. I really like this one because it shares the depth of your soul and the gentility that lives within you. Great writing in perfect form as always. Thank you for your kind comments and taking time to read my writing. Many Smiles from Lolita