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Epilogue To Premature Cremation

Clandestine meeting between the Orvatech Corp. and the Celestial Military Command Date: 04.24.2258 General Avar, the High General: The third trial test run has been successfully concluded. What are the recommendations, gentlemen. Dr. Quintas, the lead scientist: The fifth generation cybersolderies are ninety percent combat ready. There is a ten percent error quotient. Some command codes are compromised by latent moral rejection. The problem can be solved within a Zekarian solar cycle. General Ta'lith: Will the soldiers obey their platoon leader's orders in termination excursions? The alien enemy will use human hostage shields to obstruct the killing parameters. Dr. Quintas: My empirical data suggests that kill orders will be adhered to if platoon leaders command all unit soldiers to disengage their moral inhibitors. Mutiny will not occur due to morality uncertainty, but more likely to low survival probability index projection. General Avar: Was that the case with RCN #024785? Dr. Parnon, top cybernetic systems engineer: We believe he suffered irrevocable damage to his installed positronic brain during combat. Thus, resulting in an automatic upload of his human core memories. He killed his platoon leader as a result of his prior aberrant criminal behavior. General Seyath: I never did trust using those convict bastards for specialized deep cover military operations. General Avar: Well, the damage was minimal. Most of the unit was not contaminated by the rogue cybersoldier. Although he survived the battle of Oronmo, he suffered extensive injuries, am I correct doctor Quintas. Dr. Quintas: Yes, general, you are correct. He suffered extensive memory loss of his human core brain function, and was paralyzed from the neck down. The good news is that our secret experiments have not been exposed to subspace communications piracy. General Ta'lith: Are you sure, doctor. He did commandeer the satellite array at his unit's command post. Dr. Quintas: Quite certain, general. The downloaded data from his positronic brain indicate that there was no breach. He only tried to send a standard SOS to the nearest commercial planetary ports. This will not draw any unwanted attention. General Avar: And was the defective cybernetic unit destroyed. Dr. Parnon: Yes, general. I personally disposed of the unit. It was prematurely cremated as stipulated per military contract requirement. General Seyath: Those convicts really thought we were going to award them freedom for volunteering to be guinea pigs in these illegal experiments. No, the secret clause was to prematurely cremate any battle injured survivors, and those not injured were to have their human memories completely erased and become permanent cybersoldiers. General Ta'lith: Why didn't we wipe their memories from the get go, doctors? Dr. Quintas: We needed a baseline reference point in which to see if their cybernetic responses were enhanced with their human instincts as a motivating factor. Have all your questions been answered satisfactorily, gentlemen. The trio of generals: Yes, doctors.

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Date: 12/18/2016 10:39:00 PM
I enjoyed the sequel to Premature Cremation. You never know what the future holds. Especially for people who lives belong to the state. Interesting and well written narrative.
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Date: 12/15/2016 9:25:00 AM
Hi Freddie, I thoroughly enjoyed the sequel to " premature cremation " . It answered some lingering questions of how this solider wound up like this. But I must say those doctors/ scientist were a bunch of quacks. This would be a great movie because it is so well written. I must adimit I'm not into sci fy but I would watch a movie or read book with this plot. Excellent job. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/14/2016 12:38:00 PM
Ok, that was different and very compelling. You created a scene right out of the future and it wasn't a pleasant one, though your writing was very cool and right on target. Next thing you know they will come up with Cyberpoets, isn't that right General Robinson? :)
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