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Epilepilepilepsy

Ow! as I came to one morn, head hurts, feels like it's torn, naked as the day I was born, thank god, no raging horn! Not been out drinking, my membrane thinks it's shrinking, hurts, just even thinking, wincing, can't stop blinking! She said I jolted and shuddered, wheezily I coughed and spluttered, gibberish was dribbly muttered and eyelashes rapidly fluttered! The docs they do all kinds of scan, painting a picture, best they can, even earned me a driving bamn, for 6months since Epilepsy began! ©John-Ovan.P.Hull

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/25/2011 5:23:00 PM
sorry, it's been a few months sence someone else wrote about this. and she did a magnificent jod . so great i added it to my favs. this piece is good, but hers touched me much more that this. but you still get a 7.
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John-Ovan.P. Hull
Date: 12/25/2011 5:37:00 PM
Thanks, I was aiming for a me jovial feel, not too deep or sorrowful, I hope you liked the humour in the title?

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