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Epigram 5

. Shrivel shrivel shrivel on the early Spring beach

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/13/2011 4:58:00 PM

My oh my, naughty James is talking about "shrinkage," as they called it in an episode of Seinfeld. See, once in a while I do "get it" when it comes to erotic humor. This is awesome, dear. Thanks for your prayers. Much needed and greatly appreciated. I'll let you know how it goes. Love, Carolyn

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 6/9/2011 3:42:00 AM

Funny funny you,i'm laughin alone,and i see some stares :)

James Peranteau
Date: 6/1/2021 11:41:00 PM

Ty dear poet....much love, james

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 6/5/2011 5:49:00 PM

The ocean is freezing and the sand is hot, so turn on the Drifters greatest hits. Thanks as always, James, you are kind and a legitimate talent. regards, Gerard

James Peranteau
Date: 6/1/2021 11:44:00 PM

*I send that ty wink 11yearz later......much love, james

Daver Austin

Date: 6/5/2011 10:44:00 AM

Put on some lotion, dear James. Love, daver

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/4/2011 11:00:00 PM

oh, boy, shrivel again.heehee

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/4/2011 5:20:00 PM

unless under the hot hot sun James.. atmosphere is the trick luv.. super imaginative piece my friend.. oh ..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/4/2011 4:54:00 PM

Well was this Noah or both of you?...The water and air at a spring beach can give one a little chill and shaking for sure..The sun and light are great though..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for the great humor on my work..Sara

James Foulk

Date: 6/4/2011 8:21:00 AM

very creative write. thank you for your kind comment on Glow worm in love.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/4/2011 7:22:00 AM

oh dear... so funny! ;) huggs