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Epic Vision

Epic VISION I close my eyes to relax in my lawn, I have a VISION,a VISION viewed, A VISION for adventure.What is it? Something grand.....a picturesque landscape With a spectrum of vivid shades of orignal blue, An ivory coloured silver tinted castle, No human seen,a desolate castle, Empty sighs of clusterd clouds sheathed, spirally on top the castle,wind gushing.... I open my eyes .Its a dream, I tap my feet,I call my wife Linda, No, its not a dream.She responds. I close my eyes again,VISION proceeds, I enter within to explore, Heart beat faster, I get goose bumps, Inquisitive,I go on.... A place unnoticed by man, Light coppery sun rays track Only the castle,a sublime VISION, And my,my, castle shines and glistens.. I open my eyes,seated on a chair, I look around,lily flowers smile I close my eyes, and yes What a spectacular VISION A monumental fort guarding the castle, Castle the cynosure of sun , clouds, fort That protect it from man...surprising Supernatural isn't it,master piece VISION. Food for thought is what? Why would man go there? Humans can't live there, They love to exist in a deadly, Scientific friendly concrete jungle. Gotta share this ephemeral HAPPENING With my wife Linda. For contest Epic sighting#1(image 1) Rizwana Bhurani 10.11 .2015 Recent Contest:Any poem#36 Sponsor:Poet Destroyer A 28.02.2016

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Date: 3/14/2016 11:18:00 AM
Thnk you......hv nice trips....chance for adventure...so will rearead your blog....regards
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Date: 3/13/2016 10:18:00 AM
Rizwana, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Stop by my blog "LAST CALL" if you like. ((( note from MEakaPD Thank you ALL for waiting and chilling, while I sat on the sideline. Since March 1st, I moved to the 4th largest city in the USA (by population.) One of the hardest decisions EVER-EVER!!! I will keep short on my visits until April 1st. After that, there's no holding me back LOL -unless God has other plans. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/5/2015 10:16:00 AM
Wonderful dream, Rizwana.
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Date: 12/5/2015 7:16:00 AM
Thnk you....regards
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Date: 12/5/2015 12:21:00 AM
Wonderful poem and win Rizwana... big congrats!
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Date: 12/4/2015 11:49:00 PM
Rizwana, Congrats on your "Epic Sighting" Love SKAT
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 12/5/2015 7:17:00 AM
Thnk you,sweetie....regards
Date: 12/4/2015 11:07:00 PM
Rizwana, thank you for supporting my contest "Epic Sighting." Stop by my latest blog --Abandon-- if you'd like. Have a nice day. Love ~LINDA~
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 12/5/2015 7:19:00 AM
My pleasure to participte .....thnk you for your kind consideration....will surely read your blog
Date: 11/11/2015 7:15:00 PM
It's a great vision to have and to be able to share with a spouse. Mine does not even like poems and won't let me read them to him! So enjoy that wonderful treat, sharing your poetry with us and also with Linda!!
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 11/11/2015 10:10:00 PM
Thank you dear.....its my imagination....my hubby too does not listen to my poems....my kids do....let's wait for the day when life partners of us both enjoy our poems.....regards
Date: 11/11/2015 7:15:00 PM
I like that first picture too . Sure hope I can come up with a poem sooner or later for it.
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 11/11/2015 10:12:00 PM
Best of luck....plz hv a glance on my edtd poem of gratitude and do let me kno what you think

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