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Envy of the Bermise Alps

Stalwart Alps beauty sees Wild crocus blooms at your feet White around your crown Daffodils blowing in wind Sun shines brightly once again Glorious vibrant Hues, reflect the rays, much joy Eyes take and treasure Daffodils shout a Welcome to spring, trumpeting To Narcissus' song Cool breeze blow against the blooms Welcome colors fragrant joy Daffadown Dilly Jonquil a Southern beauty Amaryllis' gift

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John Freeman

Date: 3/18/2010 7:23:00 PM

Congratulations on a first place Sara. Agape, Moses

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/18/2010 6:19:00 PM

Great work, Sara...you and Doris did a wonderful job on this joined effort! 1st place..hooray for you both! ~ Love, Carrie

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/18/2010 4:50:00 PM

congrats on the first place win, my partner!! Yeah!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/18/2010 3:14:00 PM

Congrats on your 1st place win in The Twining contest.. a wonderful win and great collaboration poetry .. enjoy ..luv.. Linda-Marie

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 3/16/2010 3:44:00 PM

You are so much better at this form than I could ever be. I will just enjoy this which is both fanciful and whimsical and I wish you good luck always. Thank you for your kind remarks, Sara! Regards, Gerard!

Brian Strand

Date: 3/16/2010 3:50:00 AM

Sara thank you for your welcome comment today.Rgds Brian

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/15/2010 4:57:00 PM

enjoyed good ending mom--have a good night

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/15/2010 4:35:00 PM

I worote the 2 lines and you are to write three lines, and that is the conclusion!! we did it. :) ("v")

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/15/2010 4:19:00 PM

Lovely words Sara .. and in Rengay style too.. is is for the new contest? I just entered mine "Calendar Caviar" with a new poet co writer Ray Dillard... this is a breathtaking portrait of Spring..luv.. Linda-Marie

Lynette Chachere

Date: 3/15/2010 2:24:00 PM

(: pretty picture. your genuis on imagery, Sara! its like you make pictures show up in the minds of your readers.lol -Always&Forever Lynette

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/15/2010 12:37:00 PM

I have done the next verse--check it out. What did daddy say about the hotel?

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/15/2010 12:32:00 PM

good come back!! let me think on it.