Envy

ENVY Swimming in the deep Sharks circling in green waters Waiting for a cramp Written By: Liz Ward July 22nd 2016

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Beata Agustin

Date: 3/16/2024 6:04:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/8/2018 7:34:00 AM

This struck me immediately as hilariously funny! I had to stop myself from laughing. Of course, you were striving for humor, and you definitely tickled me.

Liz Ward
Date: 5/8/2018 8:58:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by and commenting Caren. Best wishes, Liz

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/27/2016 4:45:00 PM

Cute one!! Even though not really funny..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Liz Ward
Date: 7/29/2016 3:05:00 PM

Thanks for your thoughts and comment Sara. Best wishes. Liz

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2016 10:31:00 AM

OH great humor. Sharks are smart!!!

Liz Ward
Date: 7/23/2016 7:10:00 PM

Thanks for reading and commenting Andrea. I do appreciate it. Best wishes. Liz

Karam Misra

Date: 7/23/2016 8:29:00 AM

Nice one, Liz. There are always those who enviously wait for some mischance to befall the ones who succeed. The achievers always swim in deep shark-infested waters! ~karam~

Liz Ward
Date: 7/23/2016 8:58:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by and commenting Karam. Best wishes, Liz