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golden amber leaves adorn the tallest trees now an early sneak peek of what is to come so soon when all the others will blush

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/11/2014 6:07:00 PM

this is awesome, Daniel. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Daniel Human
Date: 10/12/2014 9:48:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea! Daniel.

Mark Trichet

Date: 10/10/2014 7:42:00 PM

Yeh great spin on this theme Daniel, loved it and congrats

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/9/2014 8:44:00 PM

Fine write my friend. Congrats on your win!!

Faye Gibson

Date: 10/9/2014 5:23:00 PM

Beautiful, Daniel. Perfect form for what you had to say. Congratulations.

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/9/2014 12:21:00 PM

beautiful imagery, congrats on your win in my contest

Daniel Human
Date: 10/12/2014 9:47:00 AM

Thank you, Francine, much appreciated. Daniel.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/9/2014 11:41:00 AM

what a great tanka, Congratulations on your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/9/2014 6:22:00 AM

- A lovely 4 st place, Daniel - Congrats with your winning poem in the contest: "Autumn Colours" - The summer is over, it disappeared just as quickly as it came :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/9/2014 4:18:00 AM

many congrats I love the imagery in this delightful tanka:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 9/7/2014 11:29:00 AM

was this the one for the contest, or a different one? I really like it, and that last line makes me picture the leaves turning red...these short, restrictive forms aren't really my strong point as I'm a free verser by nature

Daniel Human
Date: 9/7/2014 2:46:00 PM

A different one. I had to up my game when I read yours. :) I am trying all styles for contests, and loving it.