Envy

The green envy I lick from your ear as the brocade chokes you- take flight of a vengeful fear The green lessens as moments pass whirlwinds never lose their pace as moments pass You keep the brocade tight and forget all else outside. Consumed by green, from that you are strictly forbidden.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/16/2014 11:29:00 AM

Amy, wow... I don't know about that green in the ear... eeewwww! However, relationships are at its best when all the green fades away.... ps... nice featured poem..LINDA

Skat A

Date: 3/11/2014 11:30:00 AM

Hi Amy, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. I'm always enjoying The Soups top picks of the week. Take Care ~SKAT~

Heather Hill

Date: 7/16/2010 3:14:00 PM

I love it, very nice stance "the green envy I lick from your ear" my favorite part by far, thanks for sharing and commenting on my work, much love!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/10/2010 3:30:00 AM

WOW!, this is so good..thank you for sharing this work of art...always Michael