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Below is the poem entitled ENVIOUS SKY which was written by poet romeo naces. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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overcast  sky broods, darkens, threatens
crystal creek tumbles, splashes, sparkles

       "nagalugitom sa dag-om ang kalangitan 
         nagalukso-ambak, nagkidlapkidlap ang sapa"

might be the sky envies the creek's mirth,
the frolic of butterflies and damselflies

        "basig nasina ang langit sa kalipay ug hudyaka 
          sa mga alibangbang ug tapuri nga nagdula-dula," 

that fly and flit and tease the gleaming ripples
near glades of green and flowers in bloom

         "nagsaoy-saoy, nagsakdapsakdap sa tin-awng tubig 
           lunhawng kasagbutan ug mabulokong kabulakan?"

frolic and fun.."paghudyaka? pagmaya?"
spite and envy.."pagkamaigihon? pagkamasinahon?"


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  1. Date: 6/18/2015 7:25:00 AM
    Beautiful, Romeo.

  1. Date: 2/22/2015 5:15:00 AM
    Saw you online and checked your works. This is awesome! Wondered why there's no other submission after this...Will try to read more of your previous writes. Welcome back, kabayan.

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 12:10:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading this poem!

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 9:54:00 PM
    I love this sooo much. You are a great poet, Romeo. Mabuhay po!

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 7:38:00 AM
    Like the moody images you have drawn with this poem.

  1. Date: 2/17/2012 4:00:00 AM
    Thank you for sharing yours poem today, romeo. - oxox Anne-Lise