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Envious Sky

. overcast sky broods, darkens, threatens crystal creek tumbles, splashes, sparkles "nagalugitom sa dag-om ang kalangitan nagalukso-ambak, nagkidlapkidlap ang sapa" might be the sky envies the creek's mirth, the frolic of butterflies and damselflies "basig nasina ang langit sa kalipay ug hudyaka sa mga alibangbang ug tapuri nga nagdula-dula," that fly and flit and tease the gleaming ripples near glades of green and flowers in bloom "nagsaoy-saoy, nagsakdapsakdap sa tin-awng tubig lunhawng kasagbutan ug mabulokong kabulakan?" frolic and fun.."paghudyaka? pagmaya?" spite and envy.."pagkamaigihon? pagkamasinahon?" .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/23/2016 12:47:00 PM
Awesome poem, Romeo. LINDA
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Date: 1/16/2016 3:46:00 PM
Romeo, well done....SKAT
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Date: 6/18/2015 7:25:00 AM
Beautiful, Romeo.
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Date: 2/22/2015 5:15:00 AM
Saw you online and checked your works. This is awesome! Wondered why there's no other submission after this...Will try to read more of your previous writes. Welcome back, kabayan.
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Date: 9/27/2012 12:10:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this poem!
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Date: 8/13/2012 9:54:00 PM
I love this sooo much. You are a great poet, Romeo. Mabuhay po!
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Date: 6/11/2012 7:38:00 AM
Like the moody images you have drawn with this poem.
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Romeo Naces
Date: 5/29/2019 10:25:00 PM
Thanks, Joann.
Date: 2/17/2012 4:00:00 AM
Thank you for sharing yours poem today, romeo. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Romeo Naces
Date: 5/29/2019 10:26:00 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise.

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