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Entwined

Brewing my morning coffee I drew aside the half curtains Behind the gas stove to view the peaceful morn Silence all around, the doors of neighbours still locked My eyes settled with admiration on their glass panes Reflecting my flowery creeper of bursting flaming trumpets Hanging down my kitchen awnings glorifying the viewers eyes Sipping my steaming hot coffee it made me ponder over the beauty of twining The flaming trumpet had entwined itself around a thick rope till the roof While the ivy had greened my kitchen side wall, its strongest silent support My sweet peas, allamanda, yellow and pink rose creepers and jasmine Had been trained to entwine around trellises, poles, rocks and walls- all strong in themselves and whispering to the twines to thoroughly rely on them- Thereby, each trumpeting his own beauty and empowering his partner's strength February 12, 2016

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Date: 2/25/2016 2:49:00 PM
So beautifully written, Balveen. Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/15/2016 9:21:00 PM
Thanks Sandra!
Date: 2/25/2016 2:01:00 PM
Anytime.. LINDA
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Date: 3/15/2016 9:21:00 PM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 2/23/2016 11:41:00 AM
Hi Balveen, Congratulations on your Entwined win... XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/25/2016 2:47:00 AM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 2/23/2016 9:28:00 AM
Sorry nice write. Not worthy of 1st. My opinion. At least you gotta another View and Comment.....
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/25/2016 3:11:00 AM
Wow! That's some compliment- straight, blunt and unmannerly! And for what? Just because I happened to win one one of the hundreds of competitions? This one fray is not going to change your destiny or mine. So, smile it off and breathe better! Regards, Balveen
Date: 2/23/2016 8:54:00 AM
Congratulations on this awesome win! Imagery is excellent, had me right there.
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Date: 2/25/2016 3:03:00 AM
Thanks for appreciating the imagery, Susan! Love....
Date: 2/23/2016 8:01:00 AM
Beautiful images of entwined colorful flowering vines. Love the metaphor in the last line.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/25/2016 3:01:00 AM
Hi James! Thanks for your appreciation!
Date: 2/23/2016 12:16:00 AM
This is WONDERFUL! Congratulations on your well deserved first place Balveen. I was enchanted! #7
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Date: 2/25/2016 3:00:00 AM
I'm happy to read your praises, Connie! Love....
Date: 2/23/2016 12:10:00 AM
powerful last lines...special congrats on top win, balveen and huggs
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/25/2016 2:59:00 AM
Nette, how kind of you, especially when I know every line of yours is worthy of praise! Thanks, all the same! Love....
Date: 2/22/2016 10:59:00 PM
Hey Balveen, Congratulationss on your 1st place win-- great visuals and poetic language Cheers, Brian
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Date: 2/25/2016 2:57:00 AM
Thanks Brian for being so complimentary!
Date: 2/22/2016 9:57:00 PM
Very well penned Balveen.. congrats on top podium!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/25/2016 2:56:00 AM
A gracious compliment! Thanks Upma!!
Date: 2/22/2016 6:46:00 PM
Balveen, congrats on your top placement! -luloo *smiles*
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/25/2016 2:54:00 AM
Thanks Laura!
Date: 2/12/2016 12:37:00 PM
True beauty always lies in the eye of the beholder and you have portrayed a wonderful vision. DMB
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/14/2016 6:52:00 PM
Thanks Babbit for your praises!
Date: 2/12/2016 9:11:00 AM
what a wonderful image you portray Balveen i love your interpretation of entwining - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan x
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Date: 2/14/2016 6:53:00 PM
Thanks Jan! Love...

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