Entwined

E ver since I thought of you N ever a moment's regret. T ender was the lovemaking W hich planted you and set I n motion your beautiful soul. N ow I have you nineteen years. E ntwined our lives have been. D earest darling daughter of Jean.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/27/2016 1:14:00 AM

thank you for the nice reply

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/24/2016 7:16:00 AM

Ahhh! So neat how that happens! Congratulations on your win! Lovely.

Jean Murray
Date: 2/24/2016 8:26:00 AM

Thank you Susan. She is the light that came to me in my darkest hour.

Lu Loo

Date: 2/23/2016 11:58:00 AM

Jean, congrats on your placement in the contest!-luloo *Smiles*

Jean Murray
Date: 2/23/2016 1:10:00 PM

Thank you Laura.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/23/2016 11:46:00 AM

Jean, Congratulations on your Entwined win... XOX ~LINDA~

Jean Murray
Date: 2/23/2016 1:09:00 PM

Thank you Linda.

James Inman

Date: 2/23/2016 10:52:00 AM

Lovely Jean.

Jean Murray
Date: 2/23/2016 12:33:00 PM

Hello James. And thank you.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/22/2016 10:21:00 PM

Congrats on great win with this superb verse Jean..

Jean Murray
Date: 2/23/2016 4:38:00 AM

Thank you Dr. This one poured from the heart, not the head.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/14/2016 9:01:00 AM

How lovely and sweet, Jean! A great relationship between mother and daughter does bring forth an image of entwinement. [a moment's ... perfectly correct!] ~ Regards // paul

Jean Murray
Date: 2/14/2016 10:07:00 AM

Thank you Paul. Although I have three beautiful daughters, the baby remains the baby forever, n'est ce pas?

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/11/2016 10:54:00 PM

So beautiful, I think your daughter will be so proud of this poem!

Jean Murray
Date: 2/12/2016 3:32:00 AM

Her response included words like "wow" and that I was "not just a hat rack". It took me until I woke this morning to figure that one out Arthur. Thank you.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/11/2016 2:39:00 PM

love the acrostic for you have used jean :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray
Date: 2/11/2016 2:58:00 PM

Than you Jan. But is it moment's regret or moments regret?