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Entwined

They were so in love with each other, that their love became magical. They were able to levitate, speak with each other's thoughts, know each other's feelings from far, and glow in the moonlight. The village-folk didn't see that as love; they saw it as sorcery. "Burn them at the stake!" the crowd cried in unison. To the stake they were cast- the stake smelt of oil and death. A fire was lit, but didn't stop them from embracing each other. As the fire reached their feet, their bodies slowly glowed, slowly turning into a gigantic glow, then disappearing! The villagers, frightened to the core of their marrows, dropped the folks and hoes and ran into their houses to lock themselves. Little did they know the lovers had become part and parcel of Love itself.... Date: 8/2/2016

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Date: 2/26/2016 8:47:00 AM
Entwined in love's eternal glow! An excellent take on this theme, Teddy. Congratulations on a deserved win! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 2/24/2016 7:25:00 AM
Congratulations on this well-told interesting narrative! I like how you did this.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/24/2016 5:42:00 PM
Thank you so much Susan.... I'm glad that you enjoyed it!! *^_^* <3
Date: 2/23/2016 12:00:00 PM
Teddy, congrats on your placement in the contest!-luloo *Smiles*
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/24/2016 5:38:00 PM
Thank you so much Laura!! *^_^* <3
Date: 2/23/2016 11:47:00 AM
Teddy, Congratulations on your Entwined win... XOX ~LINDA~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/24/2016 5:37:00 PM
Thanks Linda!! *^_^* <3
Date: 2/23/2016 11:19:00 AM
Nice write Teddy.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/24/2016 5:35:00 PM
Thanks James ;-)
Date: 2/22/2016 10:42:00 PM
Congrats on great win with this superb verse Teddy.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/24/2016 5:33:00 PM
Thank you so much Dr. Upma!! *^_^*
Date: 2/9/2016 3:18:00 PM
wow, I love the ending of this. They could kill the bodies but not the soul of love!!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/11/2016 5:05:00 PM
Indeed. Love is all. It cannot be destroyed...
Date: 2/8/2016 10:57:00 AM
Teddy, an absolutely perfect take on the "Entwined" contest. Best of luck.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/9/2016 2:29:00 AM
Thanks Steve. :-)

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