Entranced

Doing a purple Moon dance, entranced Moving elegantly Russell Sivey

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 7/8/2012 9:58:00 PM

You are so skilled at HAIKU/SENRYUs! The imagery here is magnificent! Well done, Rusty!! Keith

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/7/2012 4:48:00 PM

Great dance that is the moon dance..Enjoyed reading this creative work this eve..Your presence at my work was inspiring...Sara

Gwendolen Song

Date: 7/7/2012 2:27:00 PM

....a magenta skyline with a dancing moon....radiant! (U are really into these Japanese poetry forms, aren't you? They suit you so well!!) gwendolen

Kash Poet

Date: 7/7/2012 12:47:00 PM

Beautiful picture here Russell .Enjoyed the read.Thanks for your inspiring words at my page.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2012 11:41:00 PM

Pretty picture, Russell!