Enthral

Sometimes users do enthrall, and take advantage, its their call, but judgement waits, on another date, their persecution, is their fate, thats all... Don Johnson Carol's poem :)

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Nancy Jones

Date: 10/27/2011 3:57:00 PM

The good thing about karma working itself out is once it's done, it's done.

Don Johnson
Date: 10/27/2011 4:35:00 PM

A friend who the "good" psychic said was a hard man last time, is suffering this time. it makes no sense to suffer for no reason. there is a payback system ...

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/27/2011 7:41:00 AM

Awesome and Incredible write Don! The lines "persecution, is their fate" are an incredible lines! Great job!

Don Johnson
Date: 10/27/2011 4:39:00 PM

perhaps my sins are listed, so when me feet get blistered, a karmic demister...to do read my "thinly wangmoo ?" on ya mate...

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 10/27/2011 6:09:00 AM

They say what goes around comes around, and I think that extends beyond this earthly life of ours. Some well chosen words for the reader to ponder, Don. Werll done. Robert.

Tony Lane

Date: 10/27/2011 5:54:00 AM

Everything comes back. Tony

Nancy Jones
Date: 10/27/2011 3:58:00 PM

I'll see your orright and raise ya a yeppers.

Don Johnson
Date: 10/27/2011 5:58:00 AM

and thats that ...orright:)