Entertain Us They Do

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Movies that we see Give us exciting highs Romance,horror,thrills Ma'tters not how good,bad be. Give us exciting highs Entertain us do Mat'ters not how good,bad be. Leaving thoughts awry. Entertain us do Yes this do all the time Leaving thoughts awry In varied ways and that's fine. Yes this do all the time Romance,horror,thrills In varied ways and that's fine Movies that we see. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2011 October, 14,2014

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Jack Ellison

Date: 10/16/2014 5:50:00 PM

Hello sweet friend! Must try one of these forms! Just dropping by to give you big hurrahs for a unique and entertaining write! As always... love from Jack XXXXX

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/16/2014 9:34:00 PM

So nice of you to drop by my dear friend Jack! :) thank you for the big hurrahs and all. Much appreciated as always by me. love and hugs to you too! Take care! Brightest blessings! Xxxx D.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/16/2014 2:23:00 PM

Now you made me want to go to the movies! Light & Love

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/16/2014 9:38:00 PM

Thank you so much for stopping by Debbie, my dear friend! I appreciate it very much. Hugs! Love and Light! :) xxx D.

Bl Devnath

Date: 10/16/2014 1:50:00 PM

Yes, entertain us they do. Simple but beautiful. 7 I feel for you. Loved always my lovely friend,bl

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/16/2014 9:36:00 PM

Thank you so much BL! You're such a nice friend.:) have a great day! Love and light! xxxxx D.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/15/2014 7:07:00 PM

I love the structure of the form with the repeated lines Dorian - you inspire me with your creativity:-) hugs jan xxx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/16/2014 9:24:00 PM

Thank you Jan! Glad you liked the repeated lines. Lol. ... Love and light! Xxxx D.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/15/2014 3:32:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative work..Yes, entertainment is great from a very good movie..Thanks for the visits by my page..Sara

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/14/2014 2:20:00 PM

D, A most interesting subject here on the modern movies and the entertainment industry today -- such as it is. A Great Write too, and I find the use of the "Pantoum" poetic style to be interesting. I've never tried that one yet, but it looks like the way you structured your subject and write melded well with the structure of the Pantoum-type verse. Looks like you're experimenting with different verse types as I am. Again, a most interesting approach my dear and a "7" too from me. Cheers, Gary