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Entering Dangerous Zone

Some situations and persons can shine as gold Dazzling with a shiny spark, blinding the eyes Omitting the faults and red flags to be considered Entering a dangerous zone where there is no return Wishing to exit and escape from a deceitful trap Desiring to see beyond the false appearances

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Date: 8/3/2016 8:24:00 AM
I found your poem well written and I thoroughly enjoyed the message. The idiom is creative and fit the theme of the poem very well. The contest was highly competitive which left out about 10 poems which were worthy of placement – including this one. As a matter of fact, if could list 15 places, you would make the list. Thanks for entering the contest and I will check out some more of your creative work!
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/3/2016 8:40:00 AM
Thank you Jesse. It was an interesting contest.
Date: 7/30/2016 3:55:00 AM
Toxic people stay toxic, however much they try to deceive us...
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 7/30/2016 7:42:00 AM
Indeed Kai
Date: 7/26/2016 5:27:00 PM
The idiom well explained Nayda. Good luck.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 7/26/2016 6:39:00 PM
Thank you Jean

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