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Come enter the wild as nature's first child, shed ancient Godly fears that could be quelled. Leave your mind behind, your savage self mild - feel life, land, waters where spirits are held. In wilderness touch the odd, even grand, searching still through this world and all its ills; no overlord will wave his heavy hand. It is too tough to bend bent human wills. Arriving amidst nature's tangled twigs; surely see each branch through this moral maze. Peer deeply in between where no one digs, be careful of judgments that this might raise. Though the wild order may seem strictly raw - its bewildering beauty brings us awe! 11/11/21 Sonnet 14 lines 106 words

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Date: 11/30/2021 10:31:00 AM
Back with "Congratulations" on this wonderful win. Nature is God's Gift. Have a blessed day writing away....................
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Greg Gaul
Date: 11/30/2021 11:56:00 AM
Bless you Paula, you always find a way be positive and empathetic. Your comments are appreciated.
Date: 11/29/2021 3:56:00 PM
Sonnets have always been a challenge for me, but you seem to have it nailed, Greg--congrats on your win!
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Greg Gaul
Date: 11/30/2021 8:01:00 AM
L.J. always delighted to have won your notice.
Date: 11/26/2021 1:43:00 AM
A very beautiful sonnet that aches to be cherished and understood Greg. Everything and every creature has its unique purpose on this planet and should be respected and revered for its contribution to our life. I love this insightful poem my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Greg Gaul
Date: 11/26/2021 5:04:00 AM
Connie, thanks for your visit. Your insights are always so kind and helpful. To be cherished.
Date: 11/19/2021 8:39:00 AM
Nature is a beautiful thing. God's Gift. I really enjoyed this write. Have a blessed day writing away....................
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Date: 11/12/2021 5:00:00 AM
For sure, experience nature as it is, without trying to remake it, thus risking injury to all. Profound write.
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Greg Gaul
Date: 11/19/2021 1:43:00 PM
Joe, you get it. The true beauty is awesome and sometimes even raw. Thank you for your critique.

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