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Enlightenment

winds of solace if tomorrow never arrives unfortunate experience

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Skat A

Date: 5/7/2016 2:57:00 AM

DARYL, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*

John Lawless

Date: 8/15/2014 9:54:00 AM

Daryl, this is one of those poems that made me squint my eyes, focus, and read it again. I drew me in seeking more than was obvious on the surface. Good luck in the contest.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/15/2014 6:45:00 AM

Brilliant haiku, Daryl But please pay attention to the syllable count

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/14/2014 10:21:00 PM

awesome, awesome, awesome.. Daryl ... You got the winds, of peace flying all over the ku-ku.... I don't care about syllable count myself.. This haiku is awesome... Thanks for the visit... Linda