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Enlightened

Enlightened you are - With your wisdom and power, Let me bathe in it. (C) Anindya Mohan Tagore (Bobby)

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/12/2015 8:45:00 PM

Hey thanks for seeing so many of my poems today. I will try to see at least a few of yours. Having computer problems today and trying to get it fixed soon! I really like this senryu. The word bath, you are using like a verb, so write it like this: bathe

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 8/12/2015 10:33:00 PM

Thanks a lot for seeing my humble writes and for pointing out the required correction. I appreciate your friendly gesture and hope in future it will be continued. Warm regards, Bobby