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enlighten me please

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enlighten me please

enlighten me please
you told me I am the best
why then put me down

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  1. Date: 1/9/2012 3:04:00 AM
    I enjoyed this poem because it reflects a common passage which effects the majority of us. Well done!

  1. Date: 12/21/2011 2:34:00 PM
    Direct to the core, very nice

  1. Date: 12/13/2011 2:26:00 AM
    Very nice Senryu here Carol.Enjoyed.

  1. Date: 12/11/2011 10:21:00 AM
    I like the shortness and simplicity here. Underneath, I sense an urgency of feeling. Thank you for sharing.

  1. Date: 12/10/2011 1:10:00 PM
    Confusing message that one is delivering..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 12/10/2011 11:45:00 AM
    love the question you pose here Carol.. hope your weekend is a good one ;) love Wilma

  1. Date: 12/9/2011 2:48:00 PM
    i know how it feels when people put you down... :/ nobody can put us down, only when we let them.. keep fighting Carol :)

  1. Date: 12/9/2011 1:06:00 PM
    don't let anyone lord over you, Carol, you are worth more than that. Hugs, catie :)