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Captivitated by the ocean and the sunrises..Time stood still for a few minutes each day...
Arriving there, open door to floors bare Moist was air, dwelling effusive with peace The enigma of time began to cease Oblivion to all but ocean, just stare Simplicity for a few days; nowhere To go, timeless, watch Gulls instead of Geese Yesterday's ravenous problems release Now live on sublime seaside oasis' air Aster, Willow won't sway in zephyr this day Only kaleidoscope color 'pon water shone Exquisite view for me, myself, alone This ecstasy delight not auspice by they Lilac, Lily doesn't bloom, chrome rust away Impervious bug repellent glistens in defiant stone Contest: Secret

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/23/2012 7:11:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sara. Excellent. Great job. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 5/23/2012 6:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "SHHHH" contest Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/23/2012 2:43:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the "shhh" contest
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Date: 5/22/2012 9:22:00 PM
Sara, thank you so much for always stopping by my mail... Congratulations,, for your awesome entry in my shh!! ~ contest...thank you for supporting my contest. Have yourself a wonderful and enyable day, :-) PD
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Date: 5/22/2012 9:07:00 PM
Wonderful piece,Sara..Congrats on your well deserved win in the Secret contest by PD...
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Date: 5/22/2012 2:12:00 PM
Sara congrats on your win..David
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Date: 11/1/2009 6:33:00 PM
nicely penned,
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Date: 10/31/2009 7:29:00 PM
Oh, I can see the wind blowing those yellow leaves (love yellow)as if hair. Beautiful and bright haiku. I so love the title. Going to my faves!
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Date: 10/31/2009 8:39:00 AM
Awesome hauki Sara >> James
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Date: 10/31/2009 5:03:00 AM
Ooh Sara, I want to see them! I've only been in aspen territory in the summer. Except for in Dec.78. And I didn't know what aspens were back then. I was looking at sequoias, that trip. And a stormy trip it was. I can only imagine a winter yellowing of wispy needles. What a lovely haiku you have written. I bet they are beautiful in the winter. Thanks for sharing. Lovingly, Dane
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