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Enharmonics

Air you breathe, hunger that sit Fair you treat, thunder that skip Hair like sheath, colored and lit Snare as you beat, blunder over your slip

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Date: 5/7/2023 12:19:00 AM
Well, hey there, Clifford. Just finished half hour homework checking on this dynamic piece.i cunclude loving your new word & esp how your poem uses term harmonics but involves all the senses, aural to inclusive of all partsi , dpainterly vision setting the mood for harnonic inclusion of all asoects. Superb writing, language painting.good to aee you
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Clifford Villalon
Date: 5/7/2023 9:56:00 AM
Thank you Miss Sally for your warm visit. :)

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