Enduring Love

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Oh God Above Omniscient Hear my symphony Under a cloudless azure sky With my indigo eyes I sing my weeping sorrow Does the soul of my sweet beloved still dwell, could this perpetual love endure ever ________________________ February 17, 2016 Poetry/Fibonacci/Enduring Love Copyright Protected, ID 16-758-789-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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James Inman

Date: 3/2/2016 1:56:00 PM

This is beautiful BW. How did I miss it. Sorry you didn't get it entered.

Constance La France
Date: 3/2/2016 3:56:00 PM

James, thanks for visiting with the beautiful, it was just a stupid mistake, I thought I had entered the contest, no point crying about it now, just turn the page ~

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 3/1/2016 6:57:00 PM

An excellent tribute to your beloved. A 7.

Constance La France
Date: 3/1/2016 6:59:00 PM

Nayda, thanks so much for visiting with the excellent and the 7, I love the inspiration you give me, you always take me to a wonderful poetic place....

Kim Difford

Date: 2/17/2016 6:59:00 PM

Fabulous!, truly! beautiful!. I love the line'hear my symphony'. Best wishes in the contest. Kim

Constance La France
Date: 2/18/2016 12:40:00 AM

Kim, thanks for the fabulous and the beautiful, oh I love that line also, thanks for visiting !

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther

Date: 2/17/2016 5:01:00 PM

LOVED THIS!! I hope to see you win.

Constance La France
Date: 2/18/2016 12:41:00 AM

Val, oh thanks for visiting with the love this and the encouragement ~