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Enduring

. Spotless her curves Breath taking her stare Enduring mine want

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Amy Green

Date: 4/3/2014 3:52:00 AM

You are leaving me breathless, more and more, with each poem I read.

James Peranteau
Date: 6/1/2021 10:40:00 PM

Seven yearz later, never too late to say ty.....much love dear poet, james

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 1/20/2012 4:56:00 PM

Yes how sweet are those sweet cherries small but succinct in flavor. Blessings and thank you too for your visit and comments, Brenda : )

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/12/2012 7:55:00 PM

Those ten words say more than some people do in a book.

Daver Austin

Date: 9/29/2011 4:14:00 PM

Da da, da da, da da! How absolutely short, sweet, and to the point. Love, daver

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/10/2011 8:28:00 PM

ut oh...hopefully all went well! light & love

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 9/7/2011 10:45:00 PM

Hahaha thats cool james good job !

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 8/25/2011 8:15:00 PM

Wonderful write James....and thanks so much for your nice comments on my poems and for all of your help.....smiles.....chiquita

James Peranteau
Date: 6/1/2021 10:36:00 PM

Gonna make sure that I peek at your writes love....have a blessed Spring....much love, james

James Foulk

Date: 8/21/2011 3:38:00 PM

a great write. thankyou for commenting on my poetry.

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/21/2011 2:41:00 PM

Enduring indeed James, gosh you have me smiling again.. :) love it!! Hope your weekend is going great.. Mine is just about over lol ~ love Wilma

James Peranteau
Date: 6/1/2021 10:37:00 PM

*smiles at ya ten yearz later...much love, james

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 8/21/2011 1:10:00 PM

Wonderful write mate, see beauties all the time, put a twinkle in this old mans eyes, lol.....with love....old Jack

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/20/2011 5:26:00 PM

Beautiful, James. On the beach here I sometimes see men who take my breath away. Unfortunately, I'm old enough to be their mother. LOL Awesome poem, dear friend. Thanks for your comments on the toad. Every word of it is true. Love, Carolyn

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/20/2011 10:09:00 AM

Wow James, this seethes with so few words! Trust me, I enjoyed.