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Endless Winter

The dewy raindrops land, Caught by the sage green leaves, Stems holding up the petite petals, As summertime prepares to flee. The sky cries above me, Into the palms of plants, The sunshine shying away, The sky darkens, ready to rant. Locked doors tight, Tears soak into my bed, Face inside my palms, Can't believe what was said. My tears stream down my face, Caught within the midst of my hand, Parents squeezing, hugging each side, Summer has come to an end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 10/13/2023 3:06:00 PM
This is a lovely poem with great poetic lines full of vivid imagery.Love the lines, ‘ The dewy raindrops land’ ‘The sky cries above me’ in particular. You have captured your feelings well as one season ends and another begins. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Have a great weekend. :):)
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Date: 10/13/2023 3:09:00 PM
I love that you love those lines, they are my favorite too! I am so happy you enjoyed my poem, you have a great weekend too :)
Date: 9/30/2023 4:24:00 PM
Inspiration from: Wake me up when September ends- Green Day
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Date: 9/30/2023 4:25:00 PM
This is such a deep and meaningful poem. - Phoenix :

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