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Endless Love

Color me blind with your endless love Move me senseless With your caring words The world is a scary place But in your love I feel safe You give me strength and hope Your smile lighten my days I would move heaven and earth Just to feel your touch would Cross oceans, climb mountains No distance would be too much I wait for the day That I'll hold you in my arms Feel your breath in my face Your heart touching mine. ***** November 24, 2016 5th place in the contest: Your best free verse love poem 2 Sponsored by: John Hamilton |

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Date: 2/25/2017 4:11:00 PM
Very nicely written Claudia, fyi scary typo not scaring. Otherwise very good! Thanks for entering, and congrats on a fine placement!
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 2/25/2017 4:21:00 PM
Fixed, John! Thank you for my placement - I'm happy you liked it! :)
Date: 2/25/2017 12:25:00 AM
Thoughtfully and creatively penned ... congrats, my friend! :)
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 2/25/2017 4:20:00 PM
Thanks a lot Greg! :)
Date: 12/9/2016 1:29:00 PM
And in this poem is is the first stanza I am so in love with. I might steal it from you ;)
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 12/9/2016 6:23:00 PM
It's not stealing because I wrote it for you guys... and your words make me really happy <3 :-)
Date: 12/8/2016 7:03:00 AM
Sure does sound like love to me. This is exactly how the heart speaks when it is taken by someone very special. Another beautiful love poem Claudia
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 12/8/2016 8:12:00 PM
It is love, Chris... thanks for your words :)

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