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Endless Love

Endless Love In its symmetrical beauty lies the vivacious void Where stars and moons have been deployed For within love there is neither time nor space Only euphoric eternity in its perpetual peaceful place Starlight of twilight in a twinkle of an eye Love keeps expanding as we microbially multiply There is more to love than what we know No binding boundaries in its everlasting glow Where angels silently scatter to idolatrously intensify That tangible touch that love can losslessly liquefy In its loving light you are comforted beyond measure In its saliferous shadow there is great displeasure For the lachrymal cries of love's controlled Hell awaits in its deception like fool's gold. I'm not putting down love...but sometimes it can be a bit deceiving lol Nov.13.2016 FOOL'S GOLD - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Julia Ward Painting...acrylic on canvas by same poet This painting was commissioned by my mom...she is ill at the moment Reproduction of Sir Lawrence Alma-Tadema...Ask Me No More A Dutch painter of special British denizenship. 1836 – 1912 Slightly altered...I hope he won't mind lol...

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Date: 6/22/2019 11:36:00 PM
Winged Warrior, Wow, I had to look up the word 'lachrymal'. I am most displeased (that I had to do so). Especially as I've always enjoyed Mozart and his unfinished Requiem. BTW, before I forget.., I like this poem. The painting is a very nice touch. -Richard
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Date: 2/10/2017 5:17:00 PM
WW, you're an endless talented poet and artist. A charming piece I like a lot :)
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Date: 11/14/2016 9:32:00 AM
P.s. You paint beautifully too:) a 7:)
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Date: 11/14/2016 10:16:00 AM
Thank you...have been painting for a long time...longer than poetry...god bless...^WW^
Date: 11/14/2016 9:31:00 AM
This is such a beautiful poem, WW, with great alliteration too:) I love your usage of words, especially that ''losslessly liquefy'':) but, if for the contest, you got to use the phrase "fool's gold " either in the beginning line or ending line:)
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Date: 11/14/2016 10:15:00 AM
Thank you so much for the heads up Jo...have corrected it...you are a beautiful soul...and if I win, you'll get 10% lol...god bless...^WW^
Date: 11/13/2016 11:13:00 PM
You're a wonderful artist and painter. I greatly enjoyed your touching beautiful poem.
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Winged Warrior
Date: 11/13/2016 11:17:00 PM
Thank you so kindly Christy...god bless...^WW^

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