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Endless Journey

My smile Causes wind cries Your heart beating fast Your being Shattering us Am I beliving? My tears Touch your Soul Ignite your humanity Changes your Inner Destiny And that is me My life Fragments of Symbols Uncompleted Puzzles If and only if I depart …. A new chapters unfolds 25/ jul/ 11 If this a poem then am dreaming

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/14/2012 8:18:00 AM

Lovely and sad.....very good Isa,I like it alot.oxox hugs Anne-Lise

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/2/2012 5:47:00 AM

believing ? (typo). The brevity us this poem entices me to read it again and again. My fav is the middle stanza...ignites your humanity..changes your inner destiny..phew...that is sooo smooth. Very nice read for my morning cup of coffee. Will be back to read more. Like your contemporary style. Gwendolen

Dinda Minardi

Date: 7/26/2011 11:17:00 AM

"If and only if I depart, A new chapter unfolds" I liked this line! thanks for your nice comment, Isa :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/26/2011 7:36:00 AM

It feels so good to be able to sit here and read your very creative writing this morning Isa. I do hope to come back soon and read more of your excellent work. Love, Carol