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Endless Eve

velvet pitch curtain pin points of light adorn sable night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/17/2009 11:00:00 AM
A wonderfully expressed haiku!
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Date: 4/16/2009 12:52:00 PM
I like it.. heheh
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Date: 3/9/2009 7:36:00 PM
Terrific..love it. BG sable night..wish I'd thought of that! BG
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Date: 3/8/2009 6:25:00 AM
wonderful use of imagination!! well done... lovely haiku!! ~ Arany
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Date: 3/7/2009 11:54:00 AM
Nice use of imagery and alliteration. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 3/7/2009 8:45:00 AM
Lovely Haiku, Creative-love the images you painted here(" pin points of life") Awesome, God Bless*Tyesha
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