Endings

Along the coast, I taste your scent While vapor of mist claims the morn; To brush spiced memoirs, now forlorn Ending vows without my consent. AWTE code Captcha Contest sponsored by Judy Konos 3/14/2015

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Skat A

Date: 4/30/2015 6:00:00 PM

Nette, a nice win. Forever ~SKAT~

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/29/2015 2:58:00 PM

Oh that is nice, Grats on your win ;)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/29/2015 2:24:00 PM

Very good use of the Captcha..Way t go...Congrats..Sara

Nandita Das

Date: 4/29/2015 9:23:00 AM

Very beautiful lines. Congratulations on your win.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/29/2015 12:13:00 AM

Very beautiful, Nette , a 7! Congratulations on your win! Blessings Eve

Mohan Chutani

Date: 4/29/2015 12:12:00 AM

one sided endings leave a void. congrats Nette.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2015 5:39:00 PM

Very nice, Nette. how are you doing these days??

Edward Ebbs

Date: 4/28/2015 2:15:00 PM

Congrats Nette :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/28/2015 2:05:00 PM

Nette, congrats on your win... Nice CAPTCHA entry... Love LINDA

Jan Allison

Date: 4/28/2015 12:20:00 PM

Very moving Nette many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Judy Konos

Date: 4/28/2015 11:30:00 AM

Thank you for entering my contest.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 4/25/2015 2:10:00 PM

Wow! Your writing is always brilliant, and what inspiration you found in a captcha code.

Constance La France

Date: 4/15/2015 9:25:00 AM

nette, beautiful words and lines, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, Blossoms and Bubbles

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 4/15/2015 6:31:00 AM

touching deeply beautiful pen nette wishing you a lovely week pal

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 4/14/2015 6:29:00 PM

sadness runs throughout this poem Nette yet it is so beautiful too hugs 7

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/14/2015 1:10:00 PM

A touching silence expressed so nicely that's hard to bear. Beautiful poem with poetic form. A 7 i feel here. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Tim Ryerson

Date: 4/14/2015 9:45:00 AM

Every line is a true gem as is your usual but the first 2 lines are my favs...Hope I'm not being too nosy here, but is this a true story my friend? Soup Mail me and let me know or are you still having technical problems? - Tim

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/14/2015 9:27:00 AM

Quite moving.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/14/2015 7:22:00 AM

I really enjoyed the poetic quality of this one..I am glad that I chose it to read today..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/14/2015 6:19:00 AM

Lovely and graceful Netter as always, the 2nd and 3rd lines my faves..Hi Nette, thank you for supporting me in the contest.. natuloy ka sa Tugue? hope to see you soon//olive eloisa

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/14/2015 4:33:00 AM

- Touching ..... and lovely written, Nette - I wish you a great Tuesday / evening - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 4/13/2015 11:39:00 PM

To brush spiced memoirs...quite an image....lovely Tim