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I told you I'd take my life for you, You didn't believe me You left me and i took a razor blade in my hand So now that your reading the last words i said Just know this poem is written in red because you decided to not believe You treated me wrong so i made it happen, but now how do you feel that its all ended because of the decision you made.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/16/2011 6:28:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Alexis. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. I am going to see if I can write something for a couple contests this weekend. Hope you find the inspiration to do the same. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/15/2011 6:24:00 PM
Very dark and sad write....and I am envisioning that u really did write it in red. Whoah. Emotive.
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