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End Your Ego

Rays of mighty powerful sun can be easily blocked Huge elephant endures helplessly when an ant bites it All have limitations, no one is greatest, end your ego You have reached the pinnacle of success, earned name and fame You couldn't have done it without assistance from others No one knows everything, all need a good team, end your ego Feel you're greatest if every moment you are happiest If every second you are enjoying life mindfully If you have tamed your senses, can maintain thought free mind for long Syllables checked at PS syllables counter 14,14,15 25.09.2021

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Date: 10/15/2021 1:51:00 PM
I have read your winner and see its good qualities. Way to go in the contest. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 10/13/2021 11:38:00 PM
A truth, Rama, that hopefully never loses its impact on those affected my friend! Blessings, Aloha!
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 10/14/2021 5:16:00 AM
Thanks for teaching me a new form and my placement. Aloha!
Date: 10/13/2021 11:22:00 PM
It's, indeed true. ending ego is essential. Great thought and beautiful work.
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 10/14/2021 5:16:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 9/26/2021 10:23:00 AM
Great message in your sijo, Rama.
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Date: 9/25/2021 11:44:00 AM
Excellent look at how the small may overwhelm the large. We all must strive to enjoy life "mindfully." Good writing, Rama.
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Date: 9/25/2021 6:17:00 AM
So true Rama, hope you're enjoying your weekend. Tom
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