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End of Us

End of Us I tried not to look but did and saw the grimace on your face the weight of your bags hanging from your shoulder too much the angry rain Pounded against the walls and windows as inside my mind I screamed out at you to STOP this , the end of our love story our love that had started so sweetly and sensually and with such friendship and breathless passion with the vision of announcements clinking glasses a house births and celebrations then Without warning a tornado ferocious unforgiving picked us up and threw us into flying debris vomiting us up at a slammed door in hell

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Date: 8/14/2016 7:21:00 PM
That's just brutal, honest writing. Thanks for sharing. -G
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Susan Walker
Date: 8/14/2016 7:42:00 PM
well thank you....never quite satisfied with my poems buy always appreciate comments/feedback...

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