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End of Summer's Reverie

As the wind gushes through the pane, she jots down crystal-clear memoirs from a flawless hand, still radiant; while tendrils of a past causes flushed eyes to melt in the glass of evening. Then pausing between emblazoned lines, a web of sagas transports her musings in a village where life details the ache and glory of unwanted farewell; the summer air turning blooms into molds as new autumn's lungs exhale without crisp sounds. Quietly, Aunt Jenny folds the sepia-book to gaze at the beauty of twilight, where cloudburst fades like distant remains... then, washing the pale mist of yester-years, she breathes in solace: a woman freed by putting a name to her own unfurled dream, ready for rain’s music of tamed sleep when a nightingale drifts from a branch, quiet, quiet as feathered reverie. (c) Must Be Read Contest For Silent One

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/25/2015 9:57:00 PM
Beautiful descriptive language! I really like this, Nette! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/24/2015 2:55:00 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Love SKAT
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Date: 11/21/2015 6:35:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL POEM MY GOOD FRIEND. Congrats on your fine win!!!! A7
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Date: 8/21/2011 6:02:00 PM
just back one more time to inhale your summer mist Nette luv..before signing off for today .. family nighttime fun and maybe some poetry creations later to post luv.. thankxx sweetie ..
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Date: 8/20/2011 12:30:00 PM
A really great poem.........George
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Date: 8/20/2011 10:32:00 AM
Sweetly penned on the change of season,Nette.Each line is exceptionally beautiful.
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Date: 8/20/2011 1:15:00 AM
Wonderful colorful write with emotions that we all feel when the season ends, I love It...with love....old Jack
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Date: 8/19/2011 11:11:00 PM
Beautiful write my friend...yet I'm clapping harder than your write for summer to leave ! *smiles* I'm a winter boy, who can't shake the fond of it ! Loved your write Nette dear poet ! Have a splendid weekend....much love, james
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Date: 8/19/2011 10:42:00 PM
loved this beautiful write. thank you for commenting on Little Cindy.
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Date: 8/19/2011 8:06:00 PM
Man, I sure do wish I can write as good as you someday...True we have different writing styles, but your talent is so well honed!! You did a magnificent job on this poem! Good job on the Free Verse, didn't you say recently that you wanted to do some more Free Verse? Well, grats on the spectacular poem nette!!
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Date: 8/19/2011 7:36:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive work..Reads like a beautiful summer early eve..Thanks for stopping by, reading and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 8/19/2011 7:11:00 PM
say it isn't so Nette luv.. I am holding onto Summer for dear life.. it is always too short.. but your poetry is always so lovely to behold..my friend.. I should be packing but am souping..oh how bad am I .. more passion posted..luv..
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Date: 8/19/2011 6:08:00 PM
Beautiful imagery.
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Date: 8/19/2011 2:07:00 PM
Very nice imagery here Nette...just wonderful.enjoyed.
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Date: 8/19/2011 1:49:00 PM
Summer is coming to an end - summer's lungs exhale drops of farewell gives the emotion and sadness when we say good bye. Lovely!
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