End of Days

take my only smile this one i have no need of... the sun shines no more © Harry J Horsman 2013

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Joe Maverick

Date: 10/22/2013 1:38:00 PM

Quite strong yet sad lines Harry, Pleased to have stopped by.'

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/22/2013 9:12:00 AM

Very sad imagery, my sweet friend. It's absolute truth that every one will face at the end of all days but poet friend must live longer because we need. Loved always, bl

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/22/2013 12:39:00 AM

just remember these words... 'Are you an angel?' and know that smile is essential. xx

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/21/2013 10:31:00 PM

Hi Harry; This is sad. I hope your sun shines tomorrow. I'll give you one of my smiles, so you can have two. Take care, good night........ lucilla

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/21/2013 8:38:00 PM

such a sad image....hope it's all in poetic play and that all is well ...

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/21/2013 2:02:00 PM

Very sad...very sad. I hope all is well. It's been a LONG while, Harry. I see you about....Do take care. Lovely write