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End It All

For all those people, Yes, I’m talking about you. I want to tell you now, This is to help you through. For those people That cut, take pills, Burn yourself, or commit suicide, Please don’t and your wills. Cutting, it’s no fun To see your own blood. It doesn’t make you feel any better, It’s really no good. Drugs aren’t any better, They’re bad for your health. It kills, it just hurts, It takes away future wealth. Burning, your skin will go. And it will just hurt even more. So please drop the lighter and the matches, There’s nothing good in store. Committing suicide, I’m sorry For those who have a lost one. Do you know the domino effect? We don’t want your name on the stone. Everyone that suffers from bullying, I’d gladly help you out, and more people out there will. You’re never ever alone, So please don’t kill. You may think I’m writing this to get more fame. Well, your wrong sweetie, Cutting, I've done the same. If everyone would care, And leave no one behind, We’d all live in a better world, Where everything is kind. Don’t worry, we’re all here for you. And it’ll stay this way until this message will send. Spread the word, share this, And hopefully it’ll end. We all have scars, That tell all our life. You can have a better tale, If you just drop that knife. Gather more people, and tell those who suffer “You’re never alone, and I won’t let you fall.” If you love them with all your heart, Help them end it all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/5/2014 4:52:00 AM
Hi Oliver.. Surprised that I am the first to comment as this an awesome poem on such a common (perhaps hidden) dysfunction. Yes... been there, and often the temptation remains, but my advice for all those out there-- seek correct professional medical help. My psychiatrist made a diagnosis I would never have considered, and the correct medication is the way to go.
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Oliver Carris
Date: 6/5/2014 4:11:00 PM
Thank you~

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