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End It

The dead and the living I would fall between I am not dead yet can't seem to live Does anyone understand this?? Can't seem to make things right All I do is turn it worse Wanting to correct my life But too many mistakes to fix Oh someone please just shoot me Take your car and run me over End this pain I feel forever Shut my life closed with one final strike

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/29/2009 3:04:00 PM
I feel the emotion in your write but you can turn things around. Well done when your writing touches someone you have done an excellent job.
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