Enchantress

In the garden of sheer grace, I serenade the ethereal beauty in you, inner. That shall never with the passage of time fade, even as you grow old, will be the winner. Beauty so magical ne'er I've seen before, brings out the inner peace in you to the fore. You mean the world to me enchantress of hearts, bewitched, reached a point where sanity departs.

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Christina Bowring

Date: 5/5/2024 9:51:00 AM

Dear MB, I love this beautifully written rispetto. It flows so well with great rhymes. Love the title too - enchanting read! The last line is so powerful. Captivated in love to the point of insanity. Many can relate to that and the power of seductive love. Really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you.

MB Farookh
Date: 5/7/2024 9:34:00 AM

Thank you so much, Christina, for your appreciation and kind comments. I had taken a temporary break from writing. Will be back soon. Hope to read your work too. Many blessings to you.