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Author's Notes:   This is a "Tanka" or a Japanese verse form write on the subject of "Enchantment."  For this write, I looked at the word "Enchantment" from the perspective of what this "word" or "term" actually means to me in an interpretative sense both as a writer and poet.  In that sense, I believe what I've written does succinctly portray the essence enchantment as it applies to what we poets actually do (or attempt to do).  The syllable count for this Tanka is:  5-7-5-7-7, for a total of 31 syllables, and the total number of words is 20 for this write.  (Gary Bateman - January 3, 2015) (Tanka)     

Categories:  allegory, emotions, feelings, imagination, inspirational, magic, and poets.

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A type of magic— Charming those involved always. Enchantment is it . . . A motive force for poets . . . To captivate readers whole! Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved (January 3, 2015) (Tanka)

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Date: 4/13/2015 8:47:00 AM
Such beautiful imagery and magical write here Gary. I really like this Tanka a lot. Awesome work as always and excellent expressions. A 7 for me. This is one I have not tried my hand at yet, the Tanka...Sharon G.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 4/13/2015 12:08:00 PM
Thanks Sharon for your most wonderful comments!! I'm glad you enjoyed this Tanka. (It is appears in my book, which I found out now is available on Amazon.com in the USA and Amazon.UK in the UK. My book is available in hard back, paper back, and via book nook.) If you're interested my book title is: Conversations with My Muse. BTW, the Tanka should be a fun write for you to do!! Best Wishes Always, Gary
Date: 1/4/2015 12:48:00 PM
truly beautifully painted piece gary excellent pen dear pal
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Gary Bateman
Date: 1/4/2015 5:03:00 PM
Liam Mate!! The Leprechauns were singing in unison with me on this one. Thanks for your read and comments on this one. Best Always Mate, Gary
Date: 1/4/2015 9:59:00 AM
Hi Gary! Another Tanka with sense. A motivated poet is enchanted by his muse...his magical words serve to enchant the reader. #7 // paul
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Date: 1/4/2015 5:01:00 PM
Hello Paul!! Looks like I captured the right words to use in building out this Tanka write!! I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it. Magical Words they are. Thanks for the Seven too. Best Always, Gary
Date: 1/3/2015 6:14:00 PM
Excellent pen Gary! I enjoyed your tanka! Well composed in format and theme my dearest friend Gary. Very nice expressions here about poets coming as a whole to draw and captivate readers by painting pictures in their minds and making theirs .Yes, I agree with you poets we tend to do that a lot, don't we Gary? :) A gigantic 7 from me! I wish you success in 2015! Have a very lovely evening! :) Love and hugs! xoxxox D.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 1/3/2015 6:41:00 PM
Hello "D" -- I agree certainly with everything that you've most carefully outlined in your comments. I would venture that the imagery piece is a very big deal for most poets, as it is with both me and you. Thanks for your super rating here too!! I also wish you all the best in 2015! Keep Writing and Spill Ink!! XOXOXO, Gary

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