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Enchanting Woods

Morning sun ascends, ..Light spills through the canopy: ...Awakening the forest. Resounding wildlife, ..Surrounded by verdant trees: ...Praise in peaceful croons. Calm water cascades, ..Caressing giant boulders: ...Bathing river rocks. Mist ascends with grace, ..Bubbling, gurgling, roaring: ...The falls sing aloud.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/6/2009 12:36:00 PM
this is beautiful Raul.....Charma
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Date: 9/5/2009 11:19:00 AM
Excellent... Picturesque with Words Now, that I know how to to this... (Its going into my favorites... MoonBee
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Date: 9/4/2009 11:50:00 AM
Now this is what i call poetry at it's finest, not many will beat this Haiku>>James
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Date: 9/3/2009 4:25:00 AM
Sensational piece Raul. Thank you for sharing . Love, Carol
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Date: 9/2/2009 11:47:00 PM
Nice sequence Raul.Especially like the last stanza.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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Date: 9/2/2009 5:41:00 PM
Beautiful nature view, Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 9/2/2009 5:09:00 PM
Outstanding choka.
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Date: 9/2/2009 2:04:00 PM
I want to reside in your poetry......for the rest of my days!!!! :) Lovely!!
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Date: 9/2/2009 1:52:00 PM
I agree with Sara! you have brought the reader on this hike with you! Raul! well done! jim
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Date: 9/2/2009 1:11:00 PM
Very descriptive writing almost like being there. Sara
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Date: 9/2/2009 1:07:00 PM
wonderful piece, i love this, I have not written this form before. thanks for sharing this. You are such a great poet. keep writing
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Date: 9/2/2009 1:07:00 PM
nice new one Raul..... always thinking up genius work....~$avannah~
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