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Enchanted Voyage Aboard the Magnolia paddle steamboat Bound down the Mississippi River Carrying its precious cargo Daring anyone for a challenge on her beauty and speed Enchantment captivates guests of its breathtaking beauty a Fortune spent to showcase and entertain in its Grand elegant saloon with carved gilded mirrors Hanging far above glimmering crystal chandeliers with flickering candle flames Illuminating dramatic sparkling rainbow colors Jump and dance with the excitement of the room Keeping my place longing to melt into the Laughter of the guest I listen to Music that plays and sings its melody to the Night’s mysterious shimmering sky Obtaining consolation with Paced movement sounds of the paddle wheel that lulls me into serenity Quietly meandering slowly coursing down the muddy banks of the Mississippi River Riding down to its adjacent towns Savoring the faint breeze scents of the warm night air Teasing the romantic scenes Unique moonlight reflecting shadows cast by hanging limbs Vulnerable to the rendering of the imagination Whimsical Xebec shape illusion mysterious Xenomorphic behavior Yearning for a never ending voyage ride Zest only of pleasure © 7/10/2015 Xebec – small three-masted pirate ship xenomorphic - having a form not its own in an unusual form; having a strange form. ''V'' New Or Old Poetry Contest 3. voyage Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 11/29/2021 12:59:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your First place win in my "V" New or Old Poems Contest, it is beautiful and wonderfully penned ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 11/25/2021 8:59:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on this new win. A great write. Have a blessed day...........
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Date: 11/25/2021 4:07:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this ... making me thank the Lord for enabling you to inspire others through your writing talent. God bless you.
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Date: 11/24/2021 9:03:00 AM
Aw this is such an excellent write in Abecedarian form...Loved it Eve...Congrats on your win...Wishing you a happy Thanksgiving...Enjoy with family...Hugs...~ Ani
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Date: 11/23/2021 7:25:00 AM
SO good to read this gem again, many congratulations on your win eve, hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/23/2021 12:55:00 AM
Wow! That’s an outstanding write in A-Z, so well portrayed, in a seamless beat! Congrats on your win, Eve!
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Date: 11/22/2021 10:07:00 PM
Brilliant poem, Eve, beautifully flows, congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 11/22/2021 4:08:00 PM
This piece is quite an accomplishment--very descriptive, reflecting the excitement of the setting. CONGRATS, Eve. Janice
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Date: 1/29/2021 8:08:00 AM
You are relly great at these Abecedarian poems, Eve ~
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Date: 3/7/2020 2:46:00 PM
Outstanding imagery in this piece Eve! Congratulations on your first place win! xxoo
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Date: 3/5/2020 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I was riding "Aboard the Magnolia paddle steamboat Bound down the Mississippi River." In your "Grand elegant saloon," I found a cold mint jubilee drink. A great write, just wish my ride was longer.........
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Date: 3/3/2020 11:21:00 PM
Congrats on a new win Eve.. Wonderful journey..
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Date: 3/3/2020 5:53:00 PM
Beautiful whimsical imagery, Eve. Congrats on your well deserved top win.
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Date: 3/3/2020 9:58:00 AM
Sounds lovely. Beautiful descriptions.
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Date: 3/3/2020 1:47:00 AM
Many congrats dear Eve for your 1st place win, fabulous imagery - as I journey down the Mississippi...with kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 2/8/2020 8:03:00 PM
wonderful story told in this form Eve... great imagery and word usage … best wishes in the contest... hugs
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Date: 7/24/2015 3:28:00 PM
EVE, Congratulations on your awesome win. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/24/2015 4:15:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Skat, very grateful for the win. Hugs eve
Date: 7/24/2015 11:28:00 AM
You've captured the mood and the essence of the Mississippi steamboat perfectly in your amazing poem, Eve! Congrats to you :)
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Date: 7/24/2015 1:20:00 PM
Laura, thank you so much for your kind words and your congratulations I'm glad you liked it. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/23/2015 11:11:00 PM
Wonderful haiku Andrea that depicts ur love for the country n flag! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 7/24/2015 1:20:00 PM
Dr. Tpma A. Sharma , thank you for your compliment and congratulations. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/23/2015 9:50:00 PM
Congrats on your win,Eve: A lovely meandering voyage. SuZ
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Date: 7/23/2015 10:16:00 PM
Thank you, Suzanne, for your compliment and the congratulations. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/23/2015 7:40:00 PM
Very evocative use of form! Congrad's on Your Win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/23/2015 10:15:00 PM
Thank you, Debbie, for the wonderful very inspiring compliment. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/23/2015 6:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win. I love the way your poem flows from one line to the next. Great piece of work. :) Janece
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Date: 7/23/2015 10:17:00 PM
Thank you, Janece, for your compliment and the congratulations. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/23/2015 6:17:00 PM
congrats on 1st place Eve a well researched entertaining poem hugs
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Date: 7/23/2015 6:55:00 PM
Thank you, Shadow, for placing me on your contest I feel very honored. Hugs eve
Date: 7/23/2015 6:06:00 PM
Outstanding! I so enjoyed this number one winner Eve. Big congrats on you well deserved win my friend!
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Date: 7/23/2015 10:18:00 PM
Connie, thank you for your supporting , inspiring compliment and the congratulations. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/23/2015 5:37:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Eve
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/23/2015 10:19:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph, for your compliment and the congratulations. Hugs Eve
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