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rocks couch amid its clear blue water for maidens to sit...sing its marvelous wonder ©2016Leonora Galinta All Rights Reserved Feb. 21, 2016 1.30am First Place Contest: (In One monoku #7)-Write what you see or feel Judged: 2/21/16 Sponsor: Poet Linda/ Poet Destroyer A

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Michael Ainsley

Date: 9/7/2016 8:59:00 PM

Less is more for the imagination to adore! TY;Thalia

Len Gasun
Date: 9/23/2016 8:05:00 AM

Thanks for taking some of your precious time to read my humble work my dear friend, Michael now Thalia. I appreciate it so much.

Len Gasun
Date: 9/23/2016 8:05:00 AM

Hugs

James Inman

Date: 3/7/2016 12:10:00 PM

Lovely image rich write, Leonora.

Len Gasun
Date: 3/7/2016 12:35:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend, James! Hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/29/2016 8:13:00 AM

- Bravo, a line of top profit .... well deserved, a wonderful line dear friend Leonora! - Big congratulations !!! - Best wishes for a lovely week - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun
Date: 2/29/2016 9:40:00 AM

Thanks my dear friend, Anne Lise. It was just maybe my lucky day being on time that day:))) Best wishes to you as well my dear friend!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2016 4:53:00 PM

so glad this scored high . CONGRATS

Len Gasun
Date: 2/28/2016 5:25:00 AM

Belated thanks my dear friend, Andrea!

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 2/26/2016 5:22:00 AM

Greetings Galeo. Congrats for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Len Gasun
Date: 2/28/2016 5:24:00 AM

Belated thank you so much my dear friend, Teddy!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/22/2016 11:58:00 PM

Now thats a lake I would love to discover!!! )

Len Gasun
Date: 2/28/2016 5:22:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Arthur!

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 2/22/2016 5:50:00 PM

Love your Monoku: I believe in Mermaids, too. SuZ

Len Gasun
Date: 2/28/2016 5:21:00 AM

Thank you so much much my dear friend, Suzannne! Me too believes in mermaids.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/22/2016 11:15:00 AM

Dear Leonora, big congratulations on placing first in the contest...so pleased to be sharing the honour with you:) I can imagine lovely mermaids sitting on those rocks, singing while combing their hair, waiting for love to come their way! ~ Regards & Hugs // paul

Len Gasun
Date: 2/28/2016 5:19:00 AM

Belated thank you my dear friend, Paul. My honor as well to share with you the winning dais. Hugs back at you!

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/22/2016 11:01:00 AM

Again it's very nice monoku read from you. A great congrats my lovely friend, bl

Len Gasun
Date: 2/28/2016 5:16:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, BL!

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 2/22/2016 8:02:00 AM

Congratulations Galeo on your wonderful win in "In one line (monoku #7) write what you SEE or FEEL" contest. You are truly amazing! :) -hans

Len Gasun
Date: 2/28/2016 5:15:00 AM

Thank you dear Hansteven!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 2/22/2016 1:41:00 AM

Excellent. Beautiful thought of write. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing it.

Len Gasun
Date: 2/28/2016 5:14:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Ravi!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/21/2016 10:09:00 PM

Congrats on ur awesome win Galeo.

Len Gasun
Date: 2/28/2016 5:13:00 AM

Belated thank you so much my dear friend, Dr. Upma!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 9:40:00 PM

Leo, my sweet sis and BFF,, Congratulations on your awesome one line verse (monoku) what you SEE or FEEL win. It's an honor to have you support my contest once again. Stop by and enjoy my blog "Ashamed" if you like. Always & Forever Your BFF ~LINDA~

Len Gasun
Date: 2/28/2016 5:13:00 AM

My loving sis and BFF, belated thanks once again for the win and honor. Ok, I'll be there soon. Again, please forgive me for being so late coz of prolonged dental problem. Hugs! Love and miss you forever Sis-BFF!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 9:37:00 PM

Hello My dearest SIS and BFF. Not only did I love the title, which was the perfect fit for this contest. I was super happy to see you made the top with the wonderful wonder you shared... Thank you with all my heart.... Forever your BFF... LINDA

Len Gasun
Date: 2/28/2016 5:09:00 AM

Thank you soo much. Hugs and kisses! Miss you!

Len Gasun
Date: 2/28/2016 5:07:00 AM

Hello My dearest SIS and BFF. Belated thank you so much for appreciating my poem in your contest. I'm so sorry for the very late reply because I felt so uncomfortable the whole week on my gum swelling due to the infected wound. Yesterday got better but this morning when I went to the dentist for a tooth filling, a slight pain again was left. Getting a toothache is too difficult coz it affected the nerves on my face up to my head, whew. Please understand. Again TYTYSM. Btw, what is CM my loving sis?

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 2/21/2016 9:38:00 PM

One thing bothers me about this PAGE... CM.... LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2016 7:49:00 PM

I like that you put the focus on the rocks too. I love how you did your monoku.

Len Gasun
Date: 2/28/2016 4:57:00 AM

Belated thank you my dear friend, Andrea.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/21/2016 12:34:00 PM

ohh, this makes me sigh as the beauty of your piece enthralls, dear lory!... sending my huggs all the way to bkk!

Len Gasun
Date: 2/28/2016 4:56:00 AM

Belated thanks my dear friend, Nette! Hugs back at you.