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Enchanted House

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Enchanted House Contest Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron Up on a hill, she awaits her dear love. For a tiny thrill he lifts her above. A spellbound release towards the heavens on high, somewhere in town she hears his words free her inside. Believe it or not, he has hurt her before, but no other man has ever loved her more. He treats her like royalty and cares very deeply, and she meets him inside loyalty, as they gently get sleepy… A home for the two lovers, spellbound for each other. No longer alone but under the covers, hell bound, for there is no other. She sits and she kisses him sweetly on his lips, he trips and just misses her feet and kisses her hips. If not for the allure of their abode passed down from generations, they would not have for sure fallen in love and enjoyed their marriage celebration. A small place to live, four walls with a chimney, no other space to live with more enthrall inside their intimacy. They recall the moment they decided to move in, they stalled because of the atonement they hid within. All they needed was a kitchen table and a bed, somewhere for her to cook dinner and rest her weary head. The first time they walked through the door, their tunes rhymed in sync to love evermore. Entranced at night and captivated in the morn’, they found romance in their sight and love was activated and sworn. Beauty in the garden just outside the veranda, with his cutie so warmhearted, his precious Amanda. Up on a hill, is where their family expanded, love was granted and cherished in a house so enchanted. Date Written: May 22, 2016

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Date: 5/28/2016 9:59:00 PM
This is great! Congrats on your placement. ;)
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/8/2016 3:07:00 PM
thank you Moon Flower :)-luloo
Date: 5/24/2016 8:28:00 AM
Full of enchanted love, congrats Laura!
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/24/2016 12:05:00 PM
thank you Sara :)-luloo
Date: 5/24/2016 8:04:00 AM
An 'enchanting' love story, Luloo, and nicely composed Prose. I also could not hear your audio well. Congratulations on your fine placement! Hugs, Sandra
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/24/2016 12:05:00 PM
thank you Sandra :)-luloo
Date: 5/24/2016 7:50:00 AM
Beautiful Laura! Congrats...
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/24/2016 12:04:00 PM
thank you Lukas :)-luloo
Date: 5/23/2016 10:35:00 PM
Laura, great entry congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/24/2016 6:48:00 AM
thank you Eve:)-luloo
Date: 5/23/2016 10:01:00 PM
Lovely, Laura! Congratulations!
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/24/2016 6:48:00 AM
thank you Kim :)-luloo
Date: 5/23/2016 7:39:00 PM
Congratulations Laura on the placement of the contest
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/24/2016 6:47:00 AM
thank you Nayda :)-luloo
Date: 5/23/2016 10:33:00 AM
Try the app super voice recorder...free download to your phone....it records as an mp3...
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Date: 5/22/2016 10:53:00 PM
A beautiful story...I had a hard time hearing as well...what did you record it on?
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/23/2016 10:22:00 AM
recordmp3online.com I am having a lot of trouble converting wav to mp3 and etc.....
Date: 5/22/2016 7:44:00 PM
Laura, wonderful poem, I love it 7, the sound for me is very low so I could not really hear your reading sadly ~
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Date: 5/22/2016 2:30:00 PM
wow, i was enticed by your heartfelt story and lilting hum... a resounding clap, dear lou!..huggs
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/22/2016 3:07:00 PM
thanks sweet Nette :)-luloo

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